Lesson Plan: First Lines
for Year 8/9
Could be adapted for younger age groups
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Groups, timing | 
content | 
A/V aids | |
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      Introduction: | 
Plenary 
5 minutes | 
In this hour we will  
1. Focus on first lines   
2. Read aloud 
3. Develop the Inner Critic  
4. Do some creative writing | 
Aims projected overhead | 
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     Reading first lines | 
5 minutes | 
Go round. Read these first lines aloud to the class
  with expression  
[give example] | 
Handout: 12 first lines 
[see below] | 
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      Ready to write? | 
1 minute | 
Have you heard enough to write your own? | |
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      Reading First lines | 
5 minutes | 
[if needed]  
Continue go round | 
12 more first lines | 
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      Write 3 first lines
  for a poem, story or novel | 
Individual, 5 minutes | 
Creative writing | 
Paper and pens | 
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      More time | 
5 minutes | 
Individual | |
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      Select the most
  powerful. | 
5 minutes | 
Look critically at the three lines and mark the most
  powerful one, the one that prompts you to write more | |
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      Read your chosen
  first line to a partner. | 
In pairs, 5 minutes | 
  Talk about what you think of when you read your chosen first line | |
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       Change over | 
In pairs, 5 minutes | 
 Listen carefully and discuss your partner’s first line.  It’s your chance to develop your Inner Critic. | |
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      Creative writing | 
Individual, 10 minutes | 
Write your first line at the top of a page and do
  some free writing.  Try to write
  without stopping to think. | |
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     Reading your
  work aloud | 
In pairs or a plenary, depending on confidence level
  of learners. 8 minutes | 
Share your writing with members of the group | |
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      Summary | 
1 minute | 
Well done, today you’ve done some creative writing
  and thought about first lines. | 
Sample: 12 First
Lines
- My name is Elizabeth but no one calls me that.
- For the first time in his life Indigo Casson had been properly ill.
- I should be arrested for this.
- Paige Owen slapped a tarot card on the back seat of the bus.
- I didn’t notice the men at first.
- It hit me when I was power walking on the treadmill at home, watching a Friends re-run for about the ninetieth time.
- You saw me before I saw you.
- It’s the end of August, my last day on the island of Ailla.
- “Honestly, Mrs Hadley,” said Mrs McGregor, wiping her eyes. “That sense of humour of yours will be the death of me yet.”
- I need you to hold it in your head, this picture of Sam Lopez when he arrived at my front door.
- Monday. I came home after a crap day at school.
- The first thing you find when yer dog learns to talk is that dogs don’t got nothing much to say.
- Meg Rosoff, How I Live Now
- Hilary McKay, Indigo’s Star
- Morris Gleitzman, Girl underground
- Elen Caldicott, The Mystery of Caldicott Manor
- Ruth Eastham, The Messenger Bird
- Randa Abdel-Fattah, Does my Head Look Big in this?
- Lucy Christopher, Stolen, a letter to my captor
- Julia Green, Bringing the Summer
- Malorie Blackman, Noughts and Crosses
- Terence Blacker, Boy 2 Girl
- Maxine Linnell, Closer.
- Patrick Ness, The Knife of never letting go
 
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